Debs Feedback 2

I got feedback from debs again in the seminar this week, which was the following:

• Cut back daves first lines so he almost interupts the mum in the argument.
• Take out the "static" shots during the first scene.
• Overlay sounds during the argument such as a radio (which i still hadnt done but planned to)
• Get more shots for the last shot in scene 1, such as a few differnt shots of when she lights the cigarette.
• When the boys leave the house the shot is too blue so change the colour (more red)
• Take out the first person going to pickpocket the mum
• Leve mum on longer right after the boys pickpocket her
• Does the zoom out at the graveyard from the mum work?